pesmica

no... moja prva pesmica u angleščini... so... what do you think??


I walk towrds his gray stone at night
I see him lying in his eternal bed,
with skin so fair and eyes so dead.
My conscience and will against my body fight,

But I aproach the stone in my own despite.
And still for some time only he is what I see,
When suddenly I think of me,
That dark grave and me, lying by his side.

I had that vision many times in my eternal dreams
But I know that nothing can take my breath
Away from me and nothing can send me to death.
But others don't know it, at least that's what it seems.

Rare know that I can't die, the others say I might.
But I wish I was more like he
Is, so we could live the same life and we
Could stay togather in life and in death holding tight.

When he was alive it all seemed so bright,
But soon after we met, to death he was led,
And I was left alone, feeling so to sad
To ever be feeling the Hope again or seing the light.

no k sm ti oblubla ančk moj da bom pokomentirala tvojo pesmco...ej res svaka ti čast da pa spravš pesmco in to še v angleščini ( k naša angleščina je veri loša) skp je res FUL KUL MEGA ŠPONSKO res BOMBASTIČNO!!!! predlagam da je to najina tema na najini pjački in mau podebatirava o tem...drgač pa najbol da si nardiš svojo temo (sam za straight- edge) in objavlaš razno literaturo

a lahko še podnapise pr te pesmci za une k ne znamo anglešk dobr hehe...sam hecam se:)sam res smisu maš za to ne js še u slovenščini ne bi znala spesnt..pa še neki ful maš hudo čupco=)

hja...to je pa moj ančk ...pardon straight-edge...čist ponosna nanjo

awww... hvala... love you guys... mnja... lahko bi res odprli eno temo za literaturo (svetovno knjževnost)... eno bi pa js mela za svoja dela k sm se odločla da jih bom tuki objavljala..